This is really great. You bring up emotions so easily and don't have to weave your way through it . These words are pretty meaningful and you don't deserved to get bashed on . at all . great job, keep your head up and look ahead .

it really does seems you moved on from you bf in this poem

Aw this poem is sad but true...how relationships can go sour. I liked the ending, how you talk about finally moving on. Good job!

! I think your writing is amazing. Seriously. I love the way you tell your story, but you leave enough blanks for the reader to put their own story into it. And these lines are really good, especially: "It was sweet at the time,

But now I understand it was just a game,

To make me cooperate just a little longer,

But, it didn’t work,

‘Cause I’m moving on,

Releasing you from me,

The person you always had to protect,

"

It just...wow. This is something I've been trying to say for a while. I'm currently in the process of realizing who my true friends are...now I'm rambling. Good job, keep writing]

-pammy

I love this poem! He did give you good advice! I need to listen more to this poem!

It's executed perfectly! You might want to submit this as one of your poems. I'll go see what else you can submit. :D

Love ya! See you tomorrow!

-the beautiful bluebird