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| crazyrandomgirl888 2008-06-18 ch 1,  | abuseit really does seems you moved on from you bf in this poem |
| KatieTheWriter 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAw this poem is sad but true...how relationships can go sour. I liked the ending, how you talk about finally moving on. Good job! |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuse! I think your writing is amazing. Seriously. I love the way you tell your story, but you leave enough blanks for the reader to put their own story into it. And these lines are really good, especially: "It was sweet at the time, But now I understand it was just a game, To make me cooperate just a little longer, But, it didn’t work, ‘Cause I’m moving on, Releasing you from me, The person you always had to protect, " It just...wow. This is something I've been trying to say for a while. I'm currently in the process of realizing who my true friends are...now I'm rambling. Good job, keep writing=] -pammy |
| Beautiful Bluebird 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem! He did give you good advice! I need to listen more to this poem! It's executed perfectly! You might want to submit this as one of your poems. I'll go see what else you can submit. :D Love ya! See you tomorrow! -the beautiful bluebird |