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| Roman C Lee 2008-03-16 ch 1,  | abuseGosh, that man was rude to that girl!(sorry, i'm terrible with names) Excellent description, but so short? Just when i was sucked in it spat me back out! Such intense hate, how can that man be so spiteful-maliciouse? well, this is hardly a well rounded critique so forgive me, but i'm dead in my seat. ^_^ Update soon! Of Black Blood has me in thrall. |