Reviews for Trying Not To Fall

doctor's diagnosis
2008-02-03
ch 1,

abusei really like the whole "realm of insanity" thing. not accusing you of plagerism, but i believe there's a book named that. i haven't read it though. hmm.. anyways. sorry, i tend to get sidetracked in reviews. the only real complain i have is punctuation, it helps to give definition to writing and shows the reader how it should be read. i can relate to this poem too. i've been pretty close to breaking lately. yes. yes, i like this

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