interesting simile

Bravo... I typically don't like things that don't rhyme, but this struck me... I actually really like it. It flows well.

Jessica

I liked the comparison a lot, and how you repeated the lines "sorrow/like clover", which kinda emphasized the comparison. I found it strange (but not really flawed) that this poem doesn't actually convey sorrow but only explains it.

So what is a four-leaf clover? XD

That's such a brilliant comparison. The poem was nicely written, and it flowed well. Great job! 8D