Awesome story, and great job at destroying the mall ;) I liked how Mary managed to be a hero and still suck at it (we need more semi-sucky heroes darn it!) Huracán made me wince (eww, greenish teeth) and laugh at him falling down so much.

I do believe that was the most brilliant-sounding one-handed clap of all time.

Hey, here I am, like I said!

What I really liked about this story were the real touches you put all the way through it. Mary feels like a regular girl, albeit with powers, and parents from hell.

The plot was creative and humorous and had several little "oo!" moments in it. Really good job!