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| Johannas mirror 2008-03-14 ch 1,  | abuseThe last stanza outshines the rest because it touches me like memory deep in my past You are honest |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseit's a really sweet piece.. all the descriptions of the beach are wonderful and it makes me miss it too (although I've only been there on vacations so i dont miss it as much as you I'm sure) One this I wasn't a big fan of was the one word lines... if you had consistently done it maybe, but it just seemed kinda random and it broke up the flow in my opinion... Anyhow it's a really great poem PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile |
| the loner that died 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseTHIS IS SO BORIND I ALMOST FELL A SLEEP HOW CAN YOU CALL THAT POETRY IT SUCKS ** AND SO DO YOU HOW MENNY TIMES HAVE YOU BEEN PUBLESHED? I'VE BEEN PUBLESHED 4 TIMES AND THE POEM YOU DISSED ON WAS 1 OF THE SO YOU KNOW WAT MOTHER ** GO TO HELL |
| Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this! It reminds me of my home. |
| Khia 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuse...*sigh* You make me wish really badly that I could be by the ocean. :) I loved the picture it painted in my mind. |
| soliloquium 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseit was pretty good. =) it was more of a memoir than a poem, though, if you know what i mean. moonlit.lullabies |