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.mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-02-04 . chapter 1
This one seems rushed with a very broken rhythm; very unlike yourself.

But I understand (kind of) what you're saying and how you don't have secrets but you don't trust him. Only time can bring you that trust back, I guess.

-stix-
maximusrexmundi 2008-02-04 . chapter 1
Hmm, well I cant really say anything helpful, so as the old saying goes, I wont say anything at all. Just wait for time to show the way is all I can say (and it rhymes too :) )
simpleplan13 2008-02-04 . chapter 1
I don't care I need to shower still... that or if I need to shower seems better to me

I like this... the whole idea of ignoring the world because of it is really awesome and I love all the little things you mention... my favorite line was "we might believe them" that was really nice...
melbell 2008-02-04 . chapter 1
lisa?
i hope youre okay.
why arent you at school?
your absence makes me paranoid.

good job.
i like how it repeats that one part.
=]
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