 .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-02-04 . chapter 1This one seems rushed with a very broken rhythm; very unlike yourself.
But I understand (kind of) what you're saying and how you don't have secrets but you don't trust him. Only time can bring you that trust back, I guess.
-stix- |
 maximusrexmundi 2008-02-04 . chapter 1Hmm, well I cant really say anything helpful, so as the old saying goes, I wont say anything at all. Just wait for time to show the way is all I can say (and it rhymes too :) ) |
 simpleplan13 2008-02-04 . chapter 1I don't care I need to shower still... that or if I need to shower seems better to me
I like this... the whole idea of ignoring the world because of it is really awesome and I love all the little things you mention... my favorite line was "we might believe them" that was really nice... |
 melbell 2008-02-04 . chapter 1lisa?
i hope youre okay.
why arent you at school?
your absence makes me paranoid.
good job.
i like how it repeats that one part.
=] |