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| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1,  | abuseThat was pretty entertaining to read :) liked it. i think the only reason an english teacher would hate it is because for an essay, the sentences werent complete, really. there were a lot of fragments but for a writing piece like this it's fine. i guess because it was supposed to be an essay -sigh- you know how english teachers are these days... --SB, review marathon |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseAww you know I liked it. I edited it, haha. :] |
| pantherscheer2010 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseIt's cool, but I can see why it would be annoying as heck for an English teacher to read. Actually, it would be easier to understand why your English teacher hated it if I knew what the essay prompt was. The problem was probably that it's too short as an essay. It was really fun to read! Christina |
| Insanity's Partner 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI think it was excellent. Does your teacher hold a grudge against you? They must be insane. |