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under the influence 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseagain, this chapter felt very rushed and could use more explanation and paragraph breaks. Also, is it Lucy or Linda...lots of confusion there. The concept and your ideas are very good, however. Being unmarried at that age is no easy task, especially with societal and church pressure to do so (believe me, I know). I would like to see Holly realize, as she goes through this process, that there's more to church (and life) than being married. Don't get me wrong--marriage is great and I'd love to be married, but I'm not going to put my life on hold until it happens.
fictionluvr 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseSo, back a few months ago when I first got started, I actually got the idea for the "luvr" part of my profile name when I saw your name on a review you had left for Leenaelle. :) Thought I'd get around to reading and reviewing some posts while I'm waiting for reviews of my own. This first chapter of Looking for Love is definitely has potential.There's a couple in their 30s at our church that met through an online Christian chatroom. They fell in love, got married, and now are expecting a baby! May not happen very often, but it is a realistic idea and very romantic when it does! Notice its been awhile since you posted. Are you planning on continuing this. It would be great if you did. Good start - very interesting.
Sebastian Osprey 2008-03-06 ch 1,	abuseI like Mark already; please keep writing this, it looks like it's going to be very sweet!
YourGraceisEnough1792 2008-02-06 ch 1,	abuseThis is a neat concept and I look forward to more! Beccs! ^_^
under the influence 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseI like the premise of this story, but I wish you didn't rush through the chapter.

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