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| Rizzy 2008-07-28 ch 6, | abuseyay! James stays! I'm glad. I can't wait to read more. please update when you can |
| Rizzy 2008-07-28 ch 3, | abuseWOW I had to review. This story is going nicely! The narrator is HILARIOUS, there were a bunch of times where I just plain flat out laughed my ** off. =) Definitely will keep reading! |
| EccentrikPirate 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abuseOnly read one and two thus far but i have to say you are a wonderful writer. i like this very much, though I'm a little confused i think that's how I'm supposed to be feeling. Awesome story. I'll keep reading. |
| Guacamole 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusehey this is pretty interesting so far! lol at first i wasn't sure if the person trying to kill themself was a girl or a guy until Hilary came along but anyways...XD. this is good you only had one mistake and it was minor...the part where it say 'If i were i bridge, i would not have been taking my last glance at New York City,...' there was more but anyways it was suppose to be 'If i were a bridge...' but otherwise doing good! |
| Tabytha -DF-5C-NDA- 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. The first sentence just hooked. It seems poetic or something. Love it. Update. |