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Reviews For: Edge of Night

Rizzy
2008-07-28
ch 6,
abuseyay! James stays! I'm glad. I can't wait to read more. please update when you can
Rizzy
2008-07-28
ch 3,
abuseWOW I had to review. This story is going nicely! The narrator is HILARIOUS, there were a bunch of times where I just plain flat out laughed my ** off. =) Definitely will keep reading!
EccentrikPirate
2008-07-17
ch 3,
abuseOnly read one and two thus far but i have to say you are a wonderful writer. i like this very much, though I'm a little confused i think that's how I'm supposed to be feeling. Awesome story. I'll keep reading.
Guacamole
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abusehey this is pretty interesting so far! lol at first i wasn't sure if the person trying to kill themself was a girl or a guy until Hilary came along but anyways...XD. this is good you only had one mistake and it was minor...the part where it say 'If i were i bridge, i would not have been taking my last glance at New York City,...' there was more but anyways it was suppose to be 'If i were a bridge...' but otherwise doing good!
Tabytha -DF-5C-NDA-
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseWow. The first sentence just hooked. It seems poetic or something. Love it. Update.
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