Reviews for sea of destruction

jrsparkus 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseits great, but i think you left the reader dangling, it needs some closure, if that makes sense.
little smiles 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseI really love this poem :) I'll admit I don't really know anything about poetry, but in my mind it sounded beautiful. I loved the image of the beach, and of their sandcastle, and the last two lines were fantastic.
Maryn Adella 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseThat was cute, the last two lines are the best! :)