I really enjoyed reading this poem. The words just paint a picture in my head. There is nothing bad I can really say about it. I could never write a poem like this. Maybe if you check the grammar of the poem. I can see a few little mistakes in the poem. I don't know if they are just typing mistakes but I'm just mentioning that there are.

Wonderful job. I think my favorite line has to be: "And now written on these wooden floors/are the riddles, to your evil heart?" Amazing work - keep writing, k. (I apologize for not keeping up with your work as of late .. life has been absolutely crazy but I hope this note finds you well.)

That was really good! Loved it a lot! You have an amazing talent.