This story is too awesome for fictionpress

AW! That was so precious! A-dor-a-ble! Loved it, hun! Nice work!

Ash

This was an interesting chapter. Keep up the good work!!

I swear, this story is so underappreciated! Why doesn't it have more reviews?!?!

I love it so far, but right now it's almost 2 in the morning so i'll read the rest tomorrow...argh why does my body's inability to function without sleep have to get in the way of everything?

I think it's because you put this in the sci-fi section, and not as many people read romance-centered stuff in the sci-fi section.

But seriously. This story deserves more luv. *yawns* well I'm gonna get some sleep and return to finishing this fic and rambling on more about its awesomeness tomorrow...

Wow. Absolutely loved it. I can't wait to read more of your writing!!

I was sorry to see this story end. Fantastic job:) Any chance of a sequel? I wish I knew more about Ghost's past and how he became an operative. What exactly is he doing as a civilian? Any chance for Jason to find love? I don't think you mentioned the fate of Stefan. Or if you did I missed it and I should do some rereading;) What happened to Eileen in the time after she was seperated from Kizu and before Stefan brought her back to the cell?I want to know how well the relationship between Kizu and Ian works without long seperations, missions, near death experiences, etc. Can they function as a normal couple inspite of their different backgrounds? I'm sure they can but it'd be interesting to see the struggles. Excellent handling of Kazu's capture and the traumatic events that followed. The emotions were well played and the overall pacing was good.There were a two or three typos but that seemed to be mostly due to spacing errors and in the last chapter the name of the club is spelled bassment instead of basement twice. Basically I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading more of your work:)

I badly want to bawl my eyes out now, because they got their happy ending when it seemed so impossible sometimes. I've been glued to the computer screen all night, absorbing chapter after chapter, and now I wish I'd taken it at a slower pace, like it deserves.
To put it shortly: I Loved It.
In capital letters. So much character developtment that felt real and honest, and such stunning descriptions. The first chapter had me nailed, I loved the way Ghost's equipment was described, how smart everything was.

-Kanilla

Wow! that was absolutely awesome. the plot, characters and the subtefuge and their technology. you made it all believable. i liked the pace. Ian just couldn't seem to figure out Ghost's identity for the longest time. lots of love for Yu-re! i really enjoyed it and i love the ending!

You're a brilliant writer - I love how subtly you approach their mutual attraction!

Really, really great. You're extremely talented, and I can't wait to get to the next chapters.

Beautiful story hun. An excellend mixture of sadness, melancholy and hope. Thoise two really went through a lot and in the end in wove them together without either of them realising it.

WOW! I just finished this story and it was one of the best that I have ever read. I was so drawn into it that I sat here and read the whole story in one go. Keep writing.

That was a really good story. Yup ! You developped the characters, and gave them personnality and background, and it fit. I've read too many fics where the characters seems artificial, and I think you avoided that. I also appreciated the mix between action and romance, and the nano technologies where nice. Also, you don't coddle your characters, but you don't do too much in gore or torture (I was shocked when I read eyeball, I tough "no way, you didn't dare ..." and yes, you did dare ... but it was well done, with the focus on the impact on Ian and the group rather than on Ghost). It's well balanced, and it has a happy end. So thank you for this story, and please excuse my poor english skills, I'm french ^^'

I have three words for you:
Oh.
My.
God.

Stunning. Simply stunning. I love it, beautifully written and a very very cool concept. Keep up the good work and don't be disheartened at the lack of reviews. People don't know what they're missing out on.

~The Acolyte

This story is really good. I really like the nanotec bit. In all it's an awesome story. Keep up the good work.

I was trying to wait to the end before reviewing but I'm afraid I'll not get there tonight, so I'll just say what I want to now.

Do not get disheartened over the lack of reviews, this is an amazing story, very well-written and you should have no doubts in your talent. I've been stuck at home these past few nights ill and your stories have been a very welcome distraction from my sickness, so thank you very much for that. Because if I can stay focused long enough to read something through this far in my state, you know it has to be good because even my boyfriend doesn't hold my attention long right now! haha.

Take care.