Very nice! I love how much meaning you express in such short lines! You are very talented!

-Katrina Zeffirelli

hm... very metaphoric message...

nice...

Beautiful and capturing. A very deep poem that really makes you stop and think!

Well done!

Dreaming Chica

A very good work of poetry, in a hard poetic format. A splendid Haiku.

One of the few true poems that deserve the classification of Haiku.