 good girl carrots 2008-02-06 . chapter 1aww, this was so cute and sweet. i enjoyed reading it. :} i don`t actually think that the line, "it was the sunshine that was missing from the world" is necessary, i get the idea that this sunshine is from a third party (ehehehe...) already, if you get what i mean. alternatively, i love the line, "i`ve spent my life collecting these pieces", because that is a very tedious exercise and i applaud you for it. good work. |