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| hime1221 2008-08-14 ch 4,  | abuseWow that was nice! I really liked it. It was a bit confusing, but that made it interesting! Keep up the good work! X--hime1221 |
| Chidori Nadare 2008-04-02 ch 13, | abuseThis one is very sensual, in a way. The fire burns until it is no more. I love it. Good job. -C.N |
| LaCharlatan 2008-03-22 ch 12, | abuseYO se que es la problema, chica, pero me gusta, como siempre! It's very cute while being true. We sometimes forget that words, tho pretty and sweet, don't mean a thing without the action. Continua! |
| Baticul 2008-03-12 ch 11, | abuseI am a huge fan of yours. This is an adorable poem. :) Keep writing! |
| Alphabetical Dreams 2008-03-11 ch 3, | abuse!! the seond line is a so wonderfully orginal! it's a really nice thought! i love the idea of this poem, and you captured the idea beautifully. i applaud you! live, laugh, love. C. a D. |
| Alphabetical Dreams 2008-03-11 ch 2, | abuselovely!! it sounded very fluid, which i think is from your lack of punctuation. a really nice effect!! the last four lines projected a really beautiful image! you a have a rela knack for words. again, i love the quote at the end. it's a nice touch. live, laugh, love. C. a D. |
| Alphabetical Dreams 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abusethat was a really nice piece! i love the quote at the beginning. is that somehting you made up, or was it by soemone else? anyhow. i also very much liked the first two lines. salvaging is such an intense word... :) i love how you said "blank sheets" at the beginning, and then "white-white empty page" at the end, becuase when i read the last line i had to scan back, since i thought you had used that line before. it was cool!! i also like the personification of the unwritten words in the middle line. very nice! kepe writing. C. a D. |
| LaCharlatan 2008-02-24 ch 8, | abuseWhich one doesn't appeal to me... I'll get back to you ^-^ As always, a writer from the heart & gut! I'll be waiting for more! |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI love poems about writing... and this one is really great.. the idea of salvaging life from the page is awesome and I love the personification of the paper and the phrase "soul of my unwritten words" and the alliteration at the end is awesome as well The only thing I think that might make the piece a bit better is some punctuation... just a thought Anyhow great piece PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile |
| Baticul 2008-02-21 ch 9, | abuseSimple...pretty...I like it :) |
| Baticul 2008-02-21 ch 5, | abuseThis may seem weird, but this seems like a more depressed version of a Shel Silverstein poem. |
| Baticul 2008-02-21 ch 3, | abuseWow, "Eden Lost" was amazing. I'll keep reading this collection :) |
| Monochromatic Design 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseTechnicolor teardrops... I really wish I had thought of that, actually. =] |
| white.rose.petal 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseI like it...I feel that way alot! Nice work! |