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| Ygg 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseVery emotional, visually stunning images! The last line is drenched with a sense of inevitability and melancholy. Great! |
| Lurid Black 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI love the line: A dream left behind Again, great work, haiku is getting better =D Awesome stuff =] |
| lookin4nemo 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI like the dot dot dot's they leave soemthing for the reader to think about i love the red fading rose kep it up! ~your cuz |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseSo much emotion in such few words... I love the last line, it really makes you think! Well done! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |