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| Le Creature 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseThe hyperbole in this piece makes it more of a rant, that is, not very compelling. Combined with a variety of awkward metaphors ("the plot was so thin, that it could be used as a replacement for glass in a window" -- glass doesn't tend to be thin, and even if it did that still wouldn't be a very could metaphor), I was left: meh. |
| that sucks 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abusei loved that movie |