Reviews for early mourning words

fairytale failure 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abuseI like the play on morning/mourning...I don't think the brackets around u are necessary, though, I got it right away. You had a really interesting mood of pain that seemed muted by the snow and cold. I really liked the last four lines, and the idea you might as well be a snowflake.
vaudeville summers 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseI loved it to pieces ^^ The scene was so hauntingly familiar to me, and my only complaint is that the last line seemed a bit too...rigid compared to the rest. Wonderful work. ((favorited of course)) ~DeeAnna
Broken Spiral 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseVery poignant - I could imagine the scene, with snowflakes in the background.