Reviews for We Are the Youth of the Nation

SheridanSpence 2008-02-17 ch 1,	abuse"For we are the ones with the truth." Hm interesting premise. Oh, but this is not the place for debates. Nice poem.
millie moo 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseNice inspirational poem there, keep up the good work! xx millie xx
Hunter Requiem 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseWhile your composition is good, and the mood you set is right, your rhyme scheme is off (either make it a pattern, or get rid of it all together), and your rythm is a touch off too. Try repeating your poem out loud, and see where you have to struggle to keep the rhythm. Finally, there is no sense of image. Try changing some of your simple statements into rich metaphors in order to give your poem some more flavour. That said, these are the comments of a college creative writing student, so please don't take them as criticism towards your skill, merely suggestions.