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| substitute angel 2008-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseThough short, this was well written. I think it'd make a good start for a longer story if that was your intention. Good work. ~Blue Calico |
| A.A.M. Carmody 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseshort and powerful. I loved this. |
| Jason Lee 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseIt's good, very effective. I read it as a poem, in my head. |