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Carrollesque 2008-02-15 . chapter 1
I hate this. HATEITHATITHAITEIT BRING BACK GLITCH DAMN YOU ALL RAGH.

I'm gonna hold my breath 'til you do. I'll just die and you'll all be sorry you were so mean and started writing NEW stories.

Seriously though, this isn't bad. The first half pales in comparison to the latter. The whole deal with the mother and the inter-family dynamic is awesome. All the nonsense about a sword club almost made me stop reading.

NOW GET BACK TO GLITCH. DOITDOITDOITDOITDOITDOIT.
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