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| rouquinamour 2008-02-08 ch 1,  | abuseaww... so beautiful! I would edit out the part in the middle about her teachers and the students; I know it's cruel to edit, but the side story sort of draws away from the beauty of the little girl who can't speak... |
| BloodXStainedXAngel 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abusewow. u no, u said tht u aspire 2 write like me but i think u hav gotten there and maybe gone above. this was amazing and moving and sad, and i felt as if someones hand was squeezing my heart. gr8 job. |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseOh...this was so sad. It was really...I got a lump in my throat. This will go in my favorites. Such a sad and beautifully written poem. The Reverse Edge Blade |