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| rouquinamour 2008-02-08 ch 1,  | abusewow; this is crazy good! "And I shall be forever married to the blade..." How perfect! |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseI can see why you found it hard to understand what the poem was about, because it was hard to understand the point. I missed your rhyming, although it's clear why there is none. I liked the picture of this blade coming down against a river of crimson; it gave me connotations. Keep it up! The Reverse Edge Blade |