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| C. Hoogkamer 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseThe piece is well written and has a great message. What distracted me was the poor spelling. Consider fixing this. |
| Lady Alera Van Hexis 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseWOW. I wish I could write anything half as good. This was absolutly amazing. It really is what I aspire to be able to write like. Just an overall fantastic job. I really love it. FAV! Come read some of my things! Cheack out Lady Alera Van Hexis Always, Lady Alera Van Hexis Queen Regent of Darkness and Lust |
| groovacious 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. Realistic too. |
| Rebekah the Scribe 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abusewow...those last two lines gave me the chills. This was really good. I liked it a lot! |