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Reviews For: If These Walls Could Talk

C. Hoogkamer
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseThe piece is well written and has a great message. What distracted me was the poor spelling. Consider fixing this.
Lady Alera Van Hexis
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseWOW. I wish I could write anything half as good. This was absolutly amazing. It really is what I aspire to be able to write like. Just an overall fantastic job. I really love it. FAV!

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Always,
Lady Alera Van Hexis
Queen Regent of Darkness and Lust
groovacious
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseI liked this.
Realistic too.
Rebekah the Scribe
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abusewow...those last two lines gave me the chills. This was really good. I liked it a lot!
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