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simpleplan13
2008-02-13
ch 1, 		abuseCan’t hurt me any more?...anymore

I like this a lot.. the rhyming of the two longer lines is really great... the only thing is I might make it a bit longer... I want more from it because it's so repetitive... awesome job
randompoetry
2008-02-06
ch 1, 		abuseHmm, interesting, and your rhyming is good.
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