|Reviews for Wintertide|
| fairytale failure 2/6/08 . chapter 2
one - great description of that feeling, like you've just been cold for too long. I loved the part in brackets at the end; like you are alive underneath, only stuck behind unmoving veins.
two - accurately describes spring coming, and the one beautiful image of chairs shedding winter coats was really original.
| randompoetry 2/6/08 . chapter 2
you have a way with descriptions, i could literally feel spring in the second poem. talent.