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fairytale failure 2008-02-06 . chapter 2
one - great description of that feeling, like you've just been cold for too long. I loved the part in brackets at the end; like you are alive underneath, only stuck behind unmoving veins.

two - accurately describes spring coming, and the one beautiful image of chairs shedding winter coats was really original.
randompoetry 2008-02-06 . chapter 2
you have a way with descriptions, i could literally feel spring in the second poem. talent.
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