Reviews for Triple Hot Fudge Sundae

kookoo4kokonuts 2008-02-06 ch 1,	abuseI love the whole plot-line/ concept of this story but you need major editing...there are a bunch of spelling errors and it took me a while to figure out what you were trying to say...Its a good one-shot nonetheless, just needs some major editting. :0D
chained-notebooks 2008-02-06 ch 1,	abusevery nice i like!! could you review my new story What tangled webs we weave..thanks if you do :)