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Reviews For: Triple Hot Fudge Sundae
Martin the Waterskier 2008-02-06 . chapter 1
I love the whole plot-line/ concept of this story but you need major editing...there are a bunch of spelling errors and it took me a while to figure out what you were trying to say...Its a good one-shot nonetheless, just needs some major editting. :0D
vampy08 2008-02-06 . chapter 1
very nice i like!!

could you review my new story
What tangled webs we weave..thanks if you do :)
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