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| Zonne 2008-06-14 ch 1,  | abuseI like how easily you portrayed the outcast and the all-to-common problem of people changing and not accepting those changes. I don't like the spelling errors - Strage and radom missing 'n' to exhausted should be too exhausted. A few minutes to re-read or run through a spell-check would be a good plan. You have a talent for taking words and expressing strong feelings, but those pesky typos take away from it. Zonne - the review marathon - link in my profile |
| StoryPictures 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseI like it but you forgot the N in Random and Strange I am radom and strage, and I dont quite fit in But other than that I liked it. |