Very nice. It really reaches out. ^-^ i wasn't expecting the ending, but it did make me laugh; and it sounds like something I would use as an excuse, even if i hated someone I likes haha. Very very nice. ^^

amazing. i love it.
i couldn't tell that it was going to end that way.
wonderful job.

yours until the wind changes,
Lost

There was so much power in this poem, but I felt as if the ending was week. Either way, I wouldn't want to cross YOUR path :D

-Shadow