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| Darkened Angel Feathers 2008-10-04 ch 25,  | abuseYou changed her middle name to Anna?! You keep changing it! So fickle... |
| Darkened Angel Feathers 2008-10-04 ch 22, | abuseCome on! Soulja Boy? That is... I don't even have words to decribe it. Please... I beg of you...listen to some REAL music. Within Temptation Audioslave and more... You still write amazingly, but there is room for improvement. |
| Darkened Angel Feathers 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abuseyou switched her middle name from Marie to Amelia... |
| Darkened Angel Feathers 2008-10-04 ch 16, | abuseI like your writing but-this isn't bashing- I don not like the J bros. That was NOT bashing, just stating an opinon. Anyways, you have a potential with your writing, just flow a bit better. Sometimes it moves too fast so you need to [ace yourself, and 1 more thing. Your dialouge is great! Keep it up. You have a naural way of putting reacions down on paper. ~until next time~ ~Darkened~ |
| Lilith Rei 2008-10-04 ch 26, | abuseThis story was amazing. Keep up the good work ^^ |
| Bri 2008-10-03 ch 26, anon. | abuseaw that was so sweet love it but im upset that its over great job and keep writing you are great at it |
| Searching Crystal 2008-09-30 ch 26, | abuseI'm so sad to see Emma and Reid go...but all great things must come to an end. This has been and amazing story. |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-09-30 ch 26, | abuseaww i LOVE it! hehe it is the end so i might cry but i love ti completely. it is different that most others and i really enjoyed it to the full. i adore you area writer and i dont think you could of done any thing more to make it better. i love all the ups and down of it and i really just love it hehe. good going |
| hija de jesucristo 2008-09-29 ch 26, | abuseOMG this is too amazing (this is what is was going to say... {you suck it ended} aren't you glad i didn't?) but seriously it ended! |
| sk8gr8 2008-09-29 ch 26, | abuseomg omg omg... I love this story! I serously cried like 5 times! especialy at the end! omg don't you wish life was a fairy tale like that? *sighs* Keep up the great work! I will definitly keep reading! |
| RoyalRose 2008-09-27 ch 25, | abuseGotta give u props for the accident chapters. They were so sad and so sweet and had alot of love. |
| bethel-babe 2008-09-22 ch 25, | abuseoh my friggin god! it was so friggin good! and i'm so glad that Reid's out of his coma... the story was getting a little nervousy... (if that's a word) without Reid. i'm so relieved!! yay, Emma and Reid are back together!! yay yay yay! i absolutely love this story A MUST READ FOR ALL! |
| Scarlet MacDuff 2008-09-21 ch 8, | abuseOMG My boyfriend made me watch Dead Silence and I was soo scared I FELL ASLEEP TOO! HAHAHAHAHAHA I really like this story so far! Can't wait to read more. |
| Jevanminx 2008-09-21 ch 25, | abuseYES, finally, gah I'm so happy, he's back, brilliant. JM |
| Eternal love17 2008-09-20 ch 25, | abuseI ABSOLUTELY FRICKIN LOVED YOUR STORY! I have seriously spent the last few hours glued to the screen. I loved Reid even though he was a jerk in the beginning. I thought Emma was an awesome character. I cried when they got into the accident though! But I'm soo glad they got a happy ending. Anyway I loved loved loved this story! |