Dude... dark. but i can see what you mean, and this is very true to life right now. i am glad that it isn't that bad... yet. that would make sneaking in really really hard... ^_^"

Wow, intense. I'm writing this at 6:30 AM so please forgive me for my lack of eloquence. As soon as I saw your update, I had to read it as soon as possible before you decide to possibly take it down. You really are a wonderful writer, I don't know why you don't see it in your writing. Anyway, overall, very well written. I like it, and that's about all I can come up with to say right now.

Cool. Very random but very original too, I liked it.

Wow, you found the perfect ending, didn't you? That was great. Nice. And I like how you expanded the random student-conversation commentary part too.

Love it!

I also liked where your thesis probably was embedded: He didn’t have to think about what to wear as long as he had his regulation uniform... How unimportant were those little losses students were discussing when compared to all the benefits that uniformity and constant supervision offered.

Wow, this is pretty extreme. I can see our schools going this far sometime in the future. Pretty dramatic. I liked this very much. Couldn't have been written any better.

Dystopic. Very very dystopic. And Orwellian, if that's how you spell it.
The idea seems very random, but at the same time, really humorous in a dark sort of way. Some of the language was a bit simplistic, but I loved the ending...ironic for someone who valued his security so much. Great job.