Such a nice piece of work. It's very well-written and the last four lines really stand out, especially with the repition. Keep up the good work! :)

*Bri

wonderful! just wonderful.

Wow...beautifully written. Just...amazing. Either it's because I'm way too sleepy to think straight, or I'm just lost for words. This is great, sad, reminiscence of everything in life, basically... if that made sense, bravo lol

Anyway, great poem, and well written. :)

~FoxyWriter