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| Meghyn 2008-05-15 ch 9, | abusehm i thought that the story was going good...but then the last chapter was just like *BAM* done, over, unrealistic. i think you were just too quick to finish it... |
| StradiNette 2008-05-03 ch 4, | abuseI thought the story was going alright up until the end of this chatper. You change it too abruptly and it doesn't even seem real. |
| yayawhynot89 2008-03-27 ch 7, | abuseI like Dean :) lol hm I wonder if there will be a threesom with Dean,Trisha, and Myra |
| miki248 2008-03-26 ch 7, | abusewow 0_0 how could please dont get her pregnant um how about she says no then he falls for her twice as hard? |
| Love2ReadnWrite 2008-03-26 ch 7, | abuseWhoa! Lovely chapter! Dean and Myra seem like a cute couple! Update soon! |
| Classychik 2008-03-09 ch 6, | abuseupdate soon, i lyked it |
| Love2ReadnWrite 2008-03-01 ch 5, | abuseHahahaha...lovely chapter!! Can't wait for the next! Update!! |
| Love2ReadnWrite 2008-02-29 ch 4, | abuse...Wow...That's just sad. A slap in the face by your own father. That's proably one of the most painful thing that could happen to a girl. My gosh...you NEED to update soon. |
| Love2ReadnWrite 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseCute story!! I liked Chapter 2 where Tisha "reunites" with her boyfriend!! LOL!! I'm still laughing!! It's a great story so far!! Update soon!! |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseAww Myra seems SO shy. And I wonder why Dean is being so nice to her. He couldn't actually *gasp* be interested in her! But yeah...I like these types of stories. Keep writing, girl. |