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Reviews For: A Teenager? Already?

Meghyn
2008-05-15
ch 9,
abusehm i thought that the story was going good...but then the last chapter was just like *BAM* done, over, unrealistic. i think you were just too quick to finish it...
StradiNette
2008-05-03
ch 4,
abuseI thought the story was going alright up until the end of this chatper.
You change it too abruptly and it doesn't even seem real.
yayawhynot89
2008-03-27
ch 7,
abuseI like Dean :) lol hm I wonder if there will be a threesom with Dean,Trisha, and Myra
miki248
2008-03-26
ch 7,
abusewow 0_0 how could please dont get her pregnant um how about she says no then he falls for her twice as hard?
Love2ReadnWrite
2008-03-26
ch 7,
abuseWhoa! Lovely chapter! Dean and Myra seem like a cute couple! Update soon!
Classychik
2008-03-09
ch 6,
abuseupdate soon, i lyked it
Love2ReadnWrite
2008-03-01
ch 5,
abuseHahahaha...lovely chapter!! Can't wait for the next! Update!!
Love2ReadnWrite
2008-02-29
ch 4,
abuse...Wow...That's just sad. A slap in the face by your own father. That's proably one of the most painful thing that could happen to a girl. My gosh...you NEED to update soon.
Love2ReadnWrite
2008-02-09
ch 2,
abuseCute story!! I liked Chapter 2 where Tisha "reunites" with her boyfriend!! LOL!! I'm still laughing!! It's a great story so far!! Update soon!!
Bazooka Joy
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseAww Myra seems SO shy. And I wonder why Dean is being so nice to her. He couldn't actually *gasp* be interested in her! But yeah...I like these types of stories. Keep writing, girl.
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