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| HMH 2008-05-28 ch 1,  | abuse"Not half full Not half empty Just half-assed" was my favorite because it was unexpected by entirely fitting. |
| Midnight In Eden 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. Sarcastic, dry and bitter are just the ingredients for a bitchy poem. I normally leave concrit but if it's okay with you, I'm just going to leave one suggestion: write more of these and drip them in bitchiness. Love it for comedic value and tongue in check bitterness. Midnight |