Sweetie you will always get a review from me. I loved it, it was really cute. And again I just really love the way you write. You deserve a billion reviews lol.

greats tory so far i really like it:) cant wait 2 see how their relationship grows

My dear I have to ask, was it my suggestion that you used? Anyway I really love this story, and I still love your style of writing it really is brilliant. and Im going put down a suggestion of day dreamer, I mean I think it's fun lol.

Right up until the phone call I was thinking, she doesn't seem that crazy to me. Quirky, but not crazy. And then she started yelling at Liam about chickens... Ha! That definitely helped interest me in the story. Unpredictable is good.

well this was absolutley awesome. And the snotty old women was really cool. There are so many women like that here, thta it is just so fitting lol. it really was good darling, can't wait for you to update. oh and maybe she should wear like a Kimono or something.

I absolutley loved it, it reminded me of soemthing that I can't quite put my finger on. But I really enjoyed it. I would like to know were it is going. though I do get a very Aussie vibe, don't ask why. anyway I thought the recipe was a good touch too, excellent mwa mwa.

do you know what I am going to say? can you guess? well I pretty much thougth that this story was... absolutley awesome. I loved reading it, and felt that it was just awesome. And I also cannot wait to read more.

I think you should continue it. I approached it like I would approach a vignette, and it felt unfinished at the end.

But it's a really good start if you're going to turn it into a longer peice. I like Marian. ;-)