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| Evelyn-Taylor 2008-02-07 ch 1,  | abuse(Reviewing while Reading) "The weather turns to an angry slumber, violent winds carrying softly sleeping snowflakes to the ground." I really am in love with this line. Very well written I love it. "His face was drawn and taught; he was in some sort of half drunken meditation, off in world even more desolate than the one he was residing in." God, you are such a great author. I love your writting style already. I really like how you showed the present, digressed and then ended back to where you started. You did a really great job, and your writing is very poetic. I like it a lot. |