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Reviews For: Convicted
eating staples
2008-02-13
ch 1, 		abuseI thought the idea was pretty good on this one, but if you want to make it great you should make it either way more raw or add tons more imagery. It was still pretty good though.
CarnivalGirl346
2008-02-08
ch 1, 		abuseOH la la! Looks like a good story coming your way!
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