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Indi Nile 2008-07-30 ch 15,	abuseI love this story! I think I like Darren better than Junior...but I have a bad time chosing. :)
riley 2008-04-03 ch 15, anon.	abusecan i just say once more that i absolutely loved this story with all my heart? because it was awesome! despite the shortness of this final chapter, i loved it just as much as all the others. i loved that you brought daren back and it was even better that you did it just for me. :) anyways, amazing. i hope that you might someday wrote a sequel to this beause that is something that i would definitely read. thanks for giving me such an amazing read!
Faulty Cameras 2008-04-02 ch 15,	abuseSo I'm just going to ramble on about this whole story. I loved this story overall. I still think that it was amazing, no matter what you say about it. And this was a good way to end it, I think. Let's see. So. You're an awesome author(and papa frita(?)). And...I would ramble more but can't think of something else to say. Oh wait. Yes I do. AH JUNIOR!! despite the fact that he was only mentioned in this chapter. anyways, done with the long ramble. Sue(who is changing her name to something much more awesome. as soon as she thinks of one.)
riley 2008-03-28 ch 14, anon.	abusei was just a little disappointed that daren did not come and save them from the bear. i personally think that would have been the most amazing way to end this story. daren could have come and stolen her away from junior! obviously not going to happen...but i must say that you have made me feel for junior and this may come as a shock...but i think i like him now. so. that's an excellent thing, because i really hated him in the beginning. i am so sad that there is so little left. here's hoping that maybe someday there will be a sequel cause that would be so AMAZING!! i felt bad for cali in this chapter but it how you portrayed the characters and everything was funny and really good. can't wait for more, even if it will be the end!
Faulty Cameras 2008-03-27 ch 14,	abuseso i love this chapter, as per usual. it's freakin good in the words of my dad(there is a story behind that which i will explain later). love the dream part(which you already knew because i'm pretty sure that i've made some inapproriate comments)okay. well, good job.
riley 2008-03-20 ch 13, anon.	abuseomg!! a bear?! that would stink. i know! daren should come in and save them! no? not going to happen...well i can dream can't i?? oh well, i still think that this story is amazing and this whole camping trip is a wicked good and humorous idea. can't wait for the next chapter update to find out that maybe daren does come and save them(i will hold out all hope until you update).
Faulty Cameras 2008-03-19 ch 13,	abuse“Well, my first question is this. Do you mind if your new partner is male?” Mind? Heck no. This just made me laugh. A lot. And the fact that it is Junior...oh that just still makes my day! He wore jeans with tears at the knees, a beat up tee-shirt and a jean jacket over it. He had sunglasses on, the lenses tinted so black that I couldn’t see his eyes when I mumbled hello. AHH JUNIOR! he seems hot. in my mind at least... I groaned as we set it up and climbed in. The tent was designed for three people. Three small people. With our backpacks, there was barely enough room to lie down. I found myself between the backpacks and Junior, very close to Junior. Ahem. you know what I'm thinking. Won't voice it in the review though... And I love love love how the chapter ends. It makes me giggle. Loved this chapter as usual. Sue P.S.-I'm obviously a good editor, you just don't know how to change things!! :D
riley 2008-03-14 ch 12, anon.	abuseOkay, so as sad as i am that things didn't work out between cali and daren...i guess i will recover. but i still am not too fond of junior. maybe i will be in later chapters. really great chapter, keep going, you're doing awesome!!
Faulty Cameras 2008-03-14 ch 12,	abuseahem. we are not speaking due to your author's note. (except for when I need you to edit again) Anyways...aside from that I loved this chapter. Love the flashback at the end. Awesome job. (even though I hate you for the a/n...just kidding.)
riley 2008-03-12 ch 11, anon.	abusedid i like it? yes of course i did because this story is awesome! i loved every little bit of this chapter. the part with daren? adorable. you left me on a semi-cliffhanger there so update soon!!
Faulty Cameras 2008-03-12 ch 11,	abusei love this chapter and i know what's going to happen next which makes me super duper happy. ahem. anyways...just because i have a trend of doing this in like every single review...AH JUNIOR!(is he even in this chapter?) bye gus!
words-are-my-weapon 2008-03-12 ch 11,	abuseIt was amazing. My dad wanted to get on the pc about half an hour ago but i was hooked...he's getting angry now but ive finished so its all good. You've written an awesome story here. The only thing i can really point out are a few spelling and grammatical errors. Otherwise i was totally hooked. The plot flowed and fitted together perfectly and it was a great piece of writing! Good job!
riley 2008-03-07 ch 10, anon.	abusei am so happy that daren is back! i love love love that she kissed him, i thought that it was perfect. i feel a little bad for junior, because you can tell that he really likes her but who cares? she kissed daren!! update soon!
Faulty Cameras 2008-03-07 ch 10,	abuseSO SAD! I LOVE JUNIOR! wow. that was a bit of over use on the caps lock button. gah! get rid of daren. i want her and junior together (i dont know why i am saying these things considering i know what happens). so yes. you are excellent. amazing. HA! words that aren't great!
Faulty Cameras 2008-03-05 ch 9,	abusegreat chapter. I would think of something I liked, but currently am still half asleep due to the whole being stuck in an airport thing. so yea, great job!

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