i really loved it.
it was really well written and i couldnt stop reading it.
this is the first piece of not published fiction that i have truley loved. well done

That was really good- write more plz!

That was very sweet. I really liked it. =D

This is really good!
I like the different way that it's written... the style is unique.

Can't wait for more!

Hi. Sorry it took me so long to get to your story! Been busy.

Now, I have to admit, I like it. It's different, but in a good way. And your grammar is pretty darn good. Haha. (Pet peeve of mine.) Cliffhangers are not fun though. So, I think you need to update soon. (Hint hint. Lol.) Can't wait to read more!

--Meg

that was good! write more please!