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Reviews For: Fooling Myself

Tobyk947
2008-03-25
ch 5,
abuseOoh...I cant wait for more!
Moonlightsonnetgrrl
2008-03-14
ch 5,
abuseWhat were you smoking? Sorry, sorry. This is really awsome, I've always wanted to try something like that to screw with people. Don't you get confused when writing this? Character switches and all that. Very cool.
Death Tastes Like Cherries
2008-02-18
ch 4,
abuseI like this story. Please continue with it soon.
Death Tastes Like Cherries
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseVery amazing. Your plot is interesting,and your charachter is complex. Keep writing.
The MS Excursion
2008-02-16
ch 3,
abuseLittle Kim and Justin are my favorite. I love how her character is able to analyze the different people. Good job, lovie.
BTN 551
2008-02-15
ch 3,
abuseI didn't really get this. It doesn't really stand out all that much from the rest of what's on this site. Try to break the mould. Keep writing, though - you'll get better if you do that.
Seisaset
2008-02-11
ch 2,
abusedefinately good chapter. i love the third person. please update soon!
Seisaset
2008-02-08
ch 1,
abusehmm i like this. please update soon
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