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| Tobyk947 2008-03-25 ch 5, | abuseOoh...I cant wait for more! |
| Moonlightsonnetgrrl 2008-03-14 ch 5, | abuseWhat were you smoking? Sorry, sorry. This is really awsome, I've always wanted to try something like that to screw with people. Don't you get confused when writing this? Character switches and all that. Very cool. |
| Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-02-18 ch 4, | abuseI like this story. Please continue with it soon. |
| Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseVery amazing. Your plot is interesting,and your charachter is complex. Keep writing. |
| The MS Excursion 2008-02-16 ch 3, | abuseLittle Kim and Justin are my favorite. I love how her character is able to analyze the different people. Good job, lovie. |
| BTN 551 2008-02-15 ch 3, | abuseI didn't really get this. It doesn't really stand out all that much from the rest of what's on this site. Try to break the mould. Keep writing, though - you'll get better if you do that. |
| Seisaset 2008-02-11 ch 2, | abusedefinately good chapter. i love the third person. please update soon! |
| Seisaset 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abusehmm i like this. please update soon |