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Reviews For: the morning after

Her Wishing Well
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseYou certainly haven't forgotten how to write, though i feel like that at the moment. This is beautifully pituresque and the language is wonderful. Love, light and peace.
Kicking Poe
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuse"the morning after" has wonderful flexibility in all the emotions and evolutions it applies to. trust me, your writing hasn't lost its spark. cheers.

(I like the name change)
a silenced revolution
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuseYou wrote a rather beautiful poem for someone who has forgotten how to write.

Interesting reference to your old pen name, and I love "sickly sweet sixteen". Just the addition of a small word, but it adds freshness. Lovely.
painted.music
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abusekonban wa

This is you forgetting how to write? This would be my writing on a good day! It was excellent, truly. I loved the ending: "a story left untold." Tragic.

Zaijen
-Shan-
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