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| Her Wishing Well 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseYou certainly haven't forgotten how to write, though i feel like that at the moment. This is beautifully pituresque and the language is wonderful. Love, light and peace. |
| Kicking Poe 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuse"the morning after" has wonderful flexibility in all the emotions and evolutions it applies to. trust me, your writing hasn't lost its spark. cheers. (I like the name change) |
| a silenced revolution 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseYou wrote a rather beautiful poem for someone who has forgotten how to write. Interesting reference to your old pen name, and I love "sickly sweet sixteen". Just the addition of a small word, but it adds freshness. Lovely. |
| painted.music 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abusekonban wa This is you forgetting how to write? This would be my writing on a good day! It was excellent, truly. I loved the ending: "a story left untold." Tragic. Zaijen -Shan- |