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overprotected 2008-02-08 . chapter 1
you're right. Sometimes adults talk to you like...=/. I particularly don't know what you're going through, and I guess it must be tough. Buy friends are there not only to understand you (even if they simply don't, sometimes) but to just be there.

what can't kill ya makes you stronger, right?

you're NOT losing your mind. I think, that you'll take the bull by its horns and be great at it!

keep going! great writing :)
XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-02-08 . chapter 1
You haven't lost your mind. I understand what your saying completly. I am gonna PM b/c hopefully it will make you feel better. This poem has so much emotion and intensity, truly beautiful. Keep pushing and never lose faith. Keep fighting.

Kristie Marie
The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-02-08 . chapter 1
No, you haven't gone mad. It's no sin to write down your feelings.
I loved this; it'll go in my favorites! You expressed yourself so truthfully, and your rhyming was as good as always!
Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade
.mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-02-07 . chapter 1
Losing your mind, maybe, but in a good way. You know, I never thought people actually cling to death like everyone else suggests... Hmm, I dunno what to say, actually.

Amazing flow and rhythm, the rhyming is aboslutely SUPERB.

-stix-
melbell 2008-02-07 . chapter 1
i adore the part about the strength.
maybe im weird.
good job.
=]
good luck with that research.
i wont research until early may.
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