I can relate! I go bananas too! I don't sleep much. Yeah. I think you get it.

You should really write an entire story starring these characters. My favorite would have to be Luce. Maybe, if you do make this into a story, you should do a part in Luce's point of view, which would definately be amusing to read. Although it's obvious, I'll tell you anyway that this was quite funny.

So I liked this. I just feel that it was a bit too short and unevenly paced; like, one minute, Lucy and Tessa are at her house, and the next they're at school. Like, there was no walking in between. And I think some more things could have been expanded on, like the scars and stuff.

Anyway, I thought the dialouge between your characters was really witty and very funny, especially the beginning part with Lucy and Tessa. I really loved the Celsius line and your description of Lucy. She's funny.