Aww this was so sweet. A loving hubby and wife, together. =D

Thank you for such a sweet fic!

Honestly, you are your own worst critic. It's another simple storyline that can be elaborated on. That's the beauty of a simple story. You're very creative, so do what you do best. Write with your imagination.

yours truly,

-Jae-

Huzzah for breaking free of the writer's block! That was cute. I love how the details are sort of there but not really. It's good because we don't get all bogged down with little things. Way to go! I hope they name the child Olga, or Abner if it's a boy. Or not.

This was an interesting story, you did a good job with it.