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| heartslol 2008-06-19 ch 10,  | abuseOMG I love this! I am so happy that Persephone and Hades are together. Such a cute couple in this story. Again I love this, and awesome job on making this story your own. |
| slash.obsessed.fangirl-42 2008-05-31 ch 10, | abuseooh, who is it? i don't know enough about mythology to figure it out myself. -sigh- and i'm too lazy to try... gone all of june? eek! what will we do without more updates?? -sigh- --kyra |
| XCgirl 2008-05-31 ch 10, | abuseAHH! Great cliffhanger!! Maybe the hero is Odysseus?? Or Horatius?? Btw, nice chapter title. The end of last chapter was a great teaser. I also liked the hot kissing in the beginning of this chapter. I could just see John Barrowman as Hades... |
| MidNight The Magnificent 2008-05-30 ch 6, | abuseHey, why is it that when Nyx spoke, "Hades" wasn't spelled backwards? Oh yeah, & who do you reckon would make a great Hades, if a movie was ever done? (I know you love Johnny Depp to death & all & so do I*, but face it. His Hades would be too weird & just NOT right.) *Believe me, I know. After all, I was the girl who, one bored summer, started the "Wear-Your-Heart-On-Your-Sleeve" fan club & LITERALLY printed tees with our fav idols on the slleves. No prizes for guessing who was displayed proudly on my sleeve the whole summer long! Gods, that was fun. What can I say? Young & stupid. & lovin' it! ~MidNight |
| slash.obsessed.fangirl-42 2008-05-23 ch 9, | abuseloved it! hehe, demeter's going to freak :D. more soon? (sorry, too tired to write any more.) --kyra |
| XCgirl 2008-05-23 ch 9, | abuseHaha, nice ending! I wish the story ended right there, 'cuz it's like one of those happily-ever-after type ones! Too bad the myth ended the way it did, but I don't want you to stop writing! |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-05-22 ch 9, | abusehi guys! i'm reviewing myself! and yes, i know that's not what a rape victim would act like, but i need to move the story along. so i'm sorry. Oh, i'm also sorry about the cliff hanger from the last chapter! i had already written some, and then i didn't post it until today, and Mountain Flower was nagging me to update because of the cliff hanger i left it on, so here it is! ta-da! |
| A Touch of Insanity 2008-05-22 ch 9, | abuseOkee dokee. Laurel read it. One thing confuses me though: wouldn't it hurt a whole lot for her to sleep with Hades after she just got raped? Other than that, it was great. Are you gonna have another chappie, now that H and P are together? Please say yes! |
| A Touch of Insanity 2008-05-20 ch 8, | abuseDude, I read it! Go me! The earlier thing with Charon, Dobby and Smeagol, right? Also, Adonis kinda sounded like a certain sex alien from a certain show...Anyway, Adonis is a creeper, and not in Tynan's weird-yet-somehow-loveable way.And, no they aren't 2-D. |
| Ghost Love Score 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting take on the legend It has a sort of ancient Greece meets the Myspace generation vibe I personally find quite cool. I'll be reading on :) |
| MidNight The Magnificent 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuse1st time I'm reviewing. Been enjoying hte story all along, but haven't reviewed yet... Really excellent so far. I just hope it gets hotter! Love Hades. (I'm terribly sorry, but I must say this, besides the Furies & the 2 main characters, everyone else just feels 2-dimensional, so far. I'm sure that can be worked on, but hey, keep up the good work! ;D) |
| XCgirl 2008-05-18 ch 6, | abuseSo great! Cool about the backwards writing! I actually went back and read it, but that's probably what you expected... |
| XCgirl 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abuseAdonis sounds like such an egotistical freak...still, the storyline is REALLY GOOD. As far as Johnny Depp movies go, I have to admit to Pirates of the Caribbean 1. He did such a good job in it that he created a whole new definition of pirate. |
| XCgirl 2008-05-18 ch 4, | abuseGreat twist! But PLEASE don't make this story have a sad ending!! I like it too much!!(Check out my profile, you'll get it) |
| slash.obsessed.fangirl-42 2008-05-17 ch 8, | abuseeep, another chapter already :D! thank you! meh, she married him. why? -sigh- i suppose she had to. demeter's an idiot if she can't see though adonis, though. and the furies at the wedding were amazing. it had better be hades to the rescue! he can't let him do that to her! so will we get another chapter as quickly as this one? 'cause i want another one already! --kyra |