I love ur book! u should try to p[ublish it! its awesome!

Haha i love it!

I POSITIVELY ADORED THIS STORY! im so going and reading the rewrite because im interested to c wat you will change


i loved the way you modernized the gods, but still respected the ancient traditions and such... it was brilliant (:

~Shayla

so i just read the first chapter of Aphrodite's Plan so far, and i already like it! i LOVE that Eros is gay! i started busting out laughing wen i read that he made some gay couples! i think that that is fantastic, i never would have been able to come up with something like it!



o and refering to your profile where it says "if your vampire sparkles you're doing it wrong"... i must say that i am impressed... you may get mobbed using that kind of lanuage! lmao! jk jk! i do like the line though, even if i DONT agree with it... i hate regular vamps (no offense, its jus not my thing... im more into elves! lol ... yah ima dork!)


ok so ima stop babling now and sign the damned review! lol

~Shayla.x.Caillat

awesome story!

it would be even awesomer (even though that's not a word...XD) if there was a sequel...(but that's just me...)

Sorry, I don't have any title suggestions, but Aphrodite's Plan fits at the beginning...Sort of...

Again, I loved it!

St13

hey! i think you should try rewriting it for sure! that's my favorite part of writing! especially since when you rewrite you get even better ideas to add in! can't wait for it!

Ahh...Okay, I like this, but Persephone was like, fourteen when Hades got her.

Well, as you know, I *did* want to see more of the Furies.

Oh, & btw, I think it might be a good idea to go back & edit that part P was all "The person kissed my hand and whispered three words, the last three words I heard for over two centuries: I love you." part. (You know what I mean. In chapter 12. I reckon that would kinda make the whole thing more polished.)

Oh, & sorry to be such a nitpicker, but darlin', one of the words you always spell wrongly is supposed to be spelled "barely", the 'barley' you've been using is actually some kind of a wheat.

Oh, & the title? I'm not too sure... Aphrodite doesn't feature quite often enough for a tale that's named AFTER her, would be nice if at the end of every chapter, there's a little input from Aphrodite on what she thinks of the events that have transgressed.

Cheers,
MidNight

Aww, that was a sweet ending. Dementer is crazy, though. I swear. It was good for a last chapter, especially how Dementer took the form of Tisi. That was cool.

I'm glad you finished, this was a very interesting tale.

Velvet.

I like it so far!

-The Blue Flash!

OMG! sorry i took so long to review! but, dude, it's over...i never thought that would happen...sweet. i must say that i'm jealous. btw, really good. Zeus isn't such an ass in this. it's nice. you know, you finishing this brought back al these nostalgic memories of Gravian High...too bad. too, too bad. but, anyway, i liked it and i congratulate you on finishing!

brilliant story! my only complaint is that i thought hades gave in too fast, but otherwise it would have dragged on a bit too much. and we didn't see enough of eros, but i suppose he was only a minor character, so i should have expected as much. -shrugs-

thanks for sharing this! i really did love it!
--kyra

Oh yeah! Zeus, now him, that's one SMART God. Half/Half. Should've just gotten him to decide right from the start. Woulda avoided a lot of messy confrontations. But then, that's no story to tell, is it? Or is he just pissed that his relatives were about to destroy HIS house in HIS presence?! Anyway, congratulations on completing your story. Such a great sense of achievement, no?
Hoping to read more from you soon!
MidNight The Magnificent

Ok I kinda felt that the ending was a bit rushed, but over all I liked it. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Argle smargle Nargle! What have you been up to as of late? You're only at 10K! Please tell me you're writing a lot and just waiting to update.

Anyway, this was a nice chapter. Sorry it took me forever to review, but I've been swamped with school work and the contest. Good work though, you did a wonderful job at all the kissing, I would say anyway. :)

Velvet.