Reviews for Complete Opposites

groovacious 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseI love this. Because I thought in the end you'll say something like, "we both love," but you surprised me which is a good thing.
fairytale failure 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abuseI loved the short, choppy flow you had in this poem, and how you used opposites to get your point across. I really liked 'I repulse You dazzle I notice You ignore' because the verbs in those lines were very descriptive. I have one suggestion; in some places, you use words that are much longer than the others that interrupt the rhythm. 'I overreact/You underestimate' and 'You sympathise' were the ones that stood out to me. If you took out these words or found shorter synonyms, it would be easier to read and make the last line stand out more.
arial-96 2008-02-07 ch 1,	abusewell, the only reason I'm reveiwing is because of your promise for FREE COOKIES! YA!... naw I'm just kidding, I prefer cake. wink, wink... no, seriouly I liked the poem, I am a big fan of the contrast sort. My favrite line of yours was: "I repulse You dazzle" How true, how true.