Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Traitor - Reviews: Page 1 of 2
ABRKent 2009-08-10 . chapter 7
update soon :]
auburn-haired-sadist-XD 2009-05-23 . chapter 4
Ya know, you'd think she had learned by now to STOP TRYING TO ESCAPE. XD
auburn-haired-sadist-XD 2009-05-23 . chapter 3
Two and a half hours later, Lilly sat, crying into the fleece blanket she had left on the couch early. Molly glanced over at Lilly and cocked her head to the side.

“What’s so sad?” Molly asked.

“The movie, the whole movie,” Lilly cried.



That's me in a nutshell. T.T I hate that movie...
Silly-girl15 2008-07-03 . chapter 7
Good chap!
Carlotta Lynn 2008-07-02 . chapter 7
I'm so excited that you updated! Thanks so much!

I am in love with this story and I cant wait to see what happens next. Poor Lily, so tired all the time. Wonder what that means... lol.

Can't wait for more!!
Stormie-daze 2008-07-02 . chapter 7
Your welcome, and dont worry I still love the story but since its summer would you please try to update more?
Lynn-Night 2008-07-02 . chapter 7
Lol! Thanks for the mention in this chapter! Haha! ~_- But I liked this chapter even if it was short but I can't really say much since I wrie short chapters as well. :P But please update right away! Love it so far!
shy green rock 2008-07-02 . chapter 7
Is she turning into a vampire?!?!?
YAY you finally posted up a new chapter. It was short and you made same mistakes with words, well you got like your homophones mixed up. Yea...
Ooh can't wait to see what's going to happen!
creativeXPRESSIONS 2008-07-02 . chapter 1
I like this Vera character and Haynes character. Your descriptions are GREAT. The summary was an eye-grabber ! I only read the first chapter, and I can't wait to read the next one.

=)

I'm a huge fan of vampire stories too !
Lynn-Night 2008-04-15 . chapter 6
Love it! Update soon!
Maxegirl1313 2008-04-13 . chapter 6
haha

"It would be creepy" lolz =)

update soon!
Stormie_Daze 2008-04-12 . chapter 6
Yay I feel special!
Silly-girl15 2008-04-11 . chapter 6
Good chaps! :) cant wait for the update.
shy green rock 2008-04-11 . chapter 6
Aww so we know that Teigan likes her, oh yea I love the name by the way, because well he just does...haha
Good job. Now she knows and soon they will be able to be happy, but now I'm wondering what is going to happen with her.
Stormie_daze 2008-04-10 . chapter 5
very nice cant wait
Return to Top