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| Carina 2008-03-17 ch 5, anon. | abuseI'm confused...you said that Ruby had called her parents in the first or second chapter and now in this chapter you say they've died. |
| Kadence 2008-03-10 ch 4,  | abuseYou need to update soon, mkay? Great plot - I like how you're building it up slowly, instead of much too quickly. You're doing this story justice! |
| Kadence 2008-03-10 ch 3, | abuseThis is getting interesting. I like your style, a lot. :) |
| Kadence 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseHmm, this seems interesting. :D I must say I'll keep reading. |
| Magischer 2008-02-20 ch 2, | abuseVery intriguing, I like the kind of dark tone it is setting, while not much of the plot has developed (how many decent stories reveal the entire story in its first two chapters? none, I would hope)yet, I can't wait for more =D Update soon! |
| RunFree 2008-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally good ...plz continue:) |