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| Anonymous (tehee) 2008-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseHn. What an intriguing idea. Sick mind that I have...the ending bit was quite enjoyable. ^_~ A grammar/spelling error here or there, but otherwise, well done. |
| Drizit 2008-02-09 ch 1,  | abuseLol have you noticed the ads at the bottom? Your story is about death and the ads were about tombstones. Nice touch to adverts. Anyway, that's a very bleak future and a very good twist at the end. You actually made me convinced he would say no and die to the pills before andy came in! Brilliantly written ^^ |